Police:so Rodriguez got anything you wanna tell us?
Rodriguez: no mr officer I'm telling you the truth I didn't do nothing!
Bob: sorry officer we did kidnap her but we ain't gonna kill her.
Rodriguez: shhh! No officer we didn't it just seems Bob wants to live in a cell the rest of his life
Police: Bob I didn't tell you to talk that's an extended sentence and you've got one too Rodriguez for covering
The most believable truth but since your talking now Bob go on...
Bob: sorry I lied to you again just now we were going to kill her ourselves but we couldn't go through with it right now scarlet and her grandma are in our torture dungeon we built last year that was the big spike in our bank transactions...she has about twenty minutes to live...
Rodriguezz: Bob how could you do this to me why did you tell em the truth!
Police: silent Rodriguez ! Bob you've got 12 years for child murderer and kidnapping Rodriguez you've got life in prison don't worry it's only 15 years here in the uk. Well it's time for you to get in the holding cell until trial on Wednesday .
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ReplyDeleteKPI: C2c Write scripts to improve dialogue with a clear purpose R
+ You show some understanding pf plot and characters
T Explain more clearly and in detail what is happening (What happens to Little Scarlett in the end?)
L What does the word "monologue" mean?
Little Scarlett is rescued by the police 15 to 20 minutes later ,she was taken to the emergency room to treat her injuries and now she is living a happy life with her grandma who was also saved from the torture dungeon.
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